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uuh my first flash move, i couldn't think of anything to do so i made this,i'll beat it'll be at the bottem of the list =)

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Lame, what was that

One of the first stickman Newgrounds flashes. It's a bit of a mess though. It is based on Dragonball Z. The art is simple as you would expect but the animation is too fast. You can hardly follow what's going on before it ends. There is also no sound. Sub-par overall.

not bad
needs more work
but this is a fine specimen of a stick figure fight

Wow that's like...Classic Newgrounds bad. I mean Dragonball sticks like this would actually be considered a top notch title. Then again what do you expect it;s 12 years old not like this review is helpuing out but at least I can use this as a "Proof of watch" token.

Needs work

Ok well not sure wehre to start off with this one there is alot more {EFFORT} that is needed to improve on this, not sure if this was just a test but i do understand its older first of all you should think about adding Story, more characters, other scenes, newer and flashier effects, and you should fix that {LOOPING} its easy to fix explained below, some backrounds aswell, just needs alot more effort but if you are going to make these really {SHORT} flashes then you should think about adding other short animations along with it, other then that it was a fun and cute very short flash but still needs more more, and much more effort, anyways good luck on anything new you may be working on.

first of all you should think about adding Story, more characters, other scenes, newer and flashier effects, Add a stop-Action code, it will stop the looping of the flash, aswell ad some play and replay buttons. Since you had Stick characters, I suggest making more Character like characters with full color facial details, This will show lots of effort in your character design, it tends to take more effort but the results will pay off alot. it being so short you should do one of two things, and that would either make the flash much longer or add other short flicks along with it so that there is a variaty of short films and not just the one thats so short.just some helpful tips on improving on this.

A very short film with sticks battling, needs more effort

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1.97 / 5.00

Apr 30, 2000
12:27 AM EDT