The worst shit I ever saw in my life.
You are very bad at this, first off you told me you made this in under a day which you should take a lot more time to work on a flash and do a few thing's over, and last but not least you suck at drawing go buy a how to draw book from the local department store.
it was a fair vid
yea i agree the characters couldve been alot better but thats all really everything else was good :P
THIS MAKES ME WANT TO RUN OUT IN THE STREET WITH A WHOLE BUNCH OF LETHAL WEAPONS, SHOOT/STAB EVERYONE TO DEATH, AND THEN FINALLY KILL MYSELF BECAUSE THIS WAS SO HORRIBLE!!!!!!1!!111!!!!!one!!!!eleve n!!!!
lol, that was fun :P anyways, that (horrible) joke out of the way, I have to say, the punch line was pretty good, the animation and character design could've been better... actually alot better, and there should have been a bit more destruction to get the point across, more than him shooting a poster and then blowing up one set of shelves
thanks for the tips
Can you understand that newgrounds it's not a place for that crap?
First thing to notice that the play button is really hard to click, you should use frame 4 of the button.
Otherwise not bad, but you should make the plot a bit clearer.