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Uhm, this is really one of my first animations ever.

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Not so good.

Definitely needs a lot more work.

First off, there's not really a plot to it at all, which is something rather important for a claymation movie to have. Just kind of a guy walking around and seeing something.

Second, a preloader will always make the animation seem better.

Thirdly, you had two white bars on either side of the animation which were really distracting. Make shur that your dimensions match your video.

The one thing that was done well was that the animation moved smoothly and wasn't choppy.

Keep working on it, though. It looks like you have potential.

Ahart responds:

Okay, thanks for the advice.
I just don't know how to get the preloader to work with the movie.
But thank you for the other tips :]

Not Bad

Stop motion is always hard, but hye you did well, do some stories next time!

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3,050
Votes
2
Score
1.50 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jul 25, 2008
10:43 PM EDT