great job cousin
Hope the next one is even better. -pete
Author Comments
Hello! Its been a while since we submitted a flash we actually took time on, Were about to release this (hopefully) Soon to be series!
Part One: Roommates. .....Enjoy!
(***FIXED***)fixed the Echo.
wtf? JEWMAN!!!!
AWWW...no Jewman...he was my favorite....lol cool though. It's about time you lazy bums did something! jkjk
Hearts and hugs losers.
(=^.^=)
A good start
A promising start, I believe someone has said that the jokes were a bit unoriginal but I'm sure you can work on that, I find I'm at my funniest when writing with someone else, compiling ideas into one joke, maybe give that a try.
Aside from that the concept is relatively promising, three guys and a rat in an apartment. I would also recommend trying to change the voice for either the guy with the green shirt or the guy with the red shirt, as they both sound and look quite similar (I'll look like a real idiiot if they're actualyl vocied by different people).
It hard to say too much this early on in a series, btu keep it up and it could be good.
Pete-the-poe responds:
Sorry to say, but the two were voiced by two different people. lol. and yes they do really look the same in person as well. but no harm done. were going to create the 2nd episode hopefully in 2 weeks. its going to be way better then this.
Ah.
My name was given to a rat? Lol.
Anyway, that was a passable movie just the sound is a bit off is all.
Needs more fixing
First of all, try to make the sound a little bit louder, and work on the jokes about staying home and watch TV all the day, is similar to some of us, but we stay on the computer all the day.
Back on the review, you can make animation better, but the most important thing now is the sound and the jokes. Good Luck.
Pete-the-poe responds:
Yup. we know, Its just the first episode. It will improve plenty in the 2nd one. These jokes did suck. I'll admit that. But the animation will improve over time.