First of all, I read your author comments. Now to the review.

You say it's not a rip off, yet everything in the animation (style, music, characters, voice over) are taken almost exactly from the Salad Fingers animations. Hell, you even named your character Jerry Jackson, his alter ego. Even if this was completely original and Salad Fingers didn't exist, the animation itself just isn't very good. The movement is choppy, the voice over is low quality, the animation is bad, there's no point whatsoever, and it's very short. There are also long periods where nothing is happening which make the animation boring.

first thing you copied every thing from david even the name (yes jerry jackson is by david) so you get no stars

Eh.

It seems WAY to much like Salad Fingers.

Stolen rip-off. Terrible.

You need to invent your own characters and develop your own unique style.
You say you're doing this to express yourself but it's not self expression when it's derivative of someone else's work.
This is precisely David Firth's style which you've just taken and then you didn't even do a good job of it.
Also, try to be less obnoxious and annoying towards voters.
You've pre-emptively called their negative comments stupid. So that means you've already decided you're not going to listen to any criticism.
You've got a lot of growing up to do and your talents are in much need of development.

eh.

It is alot like salad fingers, the story line, I gotta say if you got down a good original story down, you would be able to make a really good animation, just also work on the character