not bad fer ure first flash

i liked it but its crudly animated at best although it is ure first flash u gatta work on timing like the car was moving rlly slow and the guy walked faster then the car and try making it a bit longer . ide say this is prrty good fore your first flash soooo keep up the good work :)

Don't listen to the dick below.

It was good. I mean yes he had some valid points but, again it wasn't a trailor for a movie your making "I hope," but the original trailer for The Exorcist. Though it did have the creepy narrator. That would of been nice to hear. I think using something as simple as the trailer for an old movie is a nice way to practice and at least get some shorts together. I mean really if you try and make a full length flash vid, when you first start. Your going to end up tearing your hair out.

"Ive seen it a thousand times" *Cough*

Need Point.

I think this rule:
"Your movie must not be a pointless "demo" or "preview" without any redeeming qualities."
applies well here. A guy pulls up in a car and walks off. Sure the drawings were "ok-ish", but the animation was just a bunch of tweens. The way the guy gets onto the side walk was just awful to watch by the way. I'd like to see 3-d looking turns onto the side walk, yes that means you'll have to go frame by frame, but it'll look awesome compared to some guy just "floating" onto the sidewalk.

I also suggest you make a full length movie to submit because a "plotless" trailer won't go anywhere. I've seen it happen a thousand times someone says they're gonna make something awesome, but instead they end up making a trailer and abandoning the project.

Needs to be longer.

It needs more to it. There really isn't much of a plot becuase it's so short but for your first flash, its good.

Oh, btw, I see that you used the tutorials with your smoke. :)

not long

the traler needs more scenes