good work
good job keep up the good work
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EDIT: okay fixed the slowness, my upload always get about a -5fps
and i forgot to factor that in but fixed now
I thought of this idea after playing a game on Newgrounds done in the shadow puppet kind of style and thought id have a go. so almost 4 months later here it is, i left it for aaaaaggggeeeessss which i really regret cause i rushed the ending because i didnt reallly know where to leave it.....
anyway this is what i came up with in the end hope you like.
Decent Submission here
Could have been better, like the animation which needed some work but its nothing bad.
Great job with the music compression.
Overall it was nothing bad but its nothing amazing either.
very well made
I liked you noir style in this flash
pretty good
Erobus responds:
thanks..... i have no idea what you mean by noir(too lazy to look it up im sure it means Awesome ;p)
well
it was good, but the movement (especially walking) wasn't the best.
Erobus responds:
yeh that was part of the shadow puppet type idea, but thanks for reviewing
Not bad
Your animation style and graphic art was well done and fairly unique; we don't see too many black and white silhouette movies, and the music was well compressed to keep the file size down without ruining it's quality. However, I think that the two main things that brought my vote down were a lack of plot and sound effects. You could have easily made this front page material with a good story and a few more sounds, but you are certainly on the right track, so don't give up! Maybe present this one as a trailer and have a longer flash with a more in depth story to come? The sky is the limit my friend.
6/10
Erobus responds:
thanks, i really appreciate the honesty and good proper feedback, i think frontpage is alittle ambitous but still thatnks for the vote of confidence