It was good

Its a good start i liked it, i could be longer but w.e it was good

Well

the reason it is short is because it for a collb called Prayer by Disturbed Collab but i belivie that the collab is dead sooo well...

too short.

don't submit unfinished work. it should be at least 3 minutes. and try making something not stick.

well it's short

12 seconds... please submit a full movie. and it's stick too. i mean it shouldn't take that long to make a full length movie. it's not like you are animating faces and stuff that should take 3 months. but this is a stick movie. there are a bunch of random violence stick movies. it could use some originality.

Good

You should finish it. Or, lengthen it, if you think it's finished. You have a really good start to something that you could make awesome.