this is my first flash movie and only the intro please tell me what i could do to improve and yes there would be more seires! if there is any critisism i need it to be on how to improve it and yeah im 14.
Cool!
That was freaking amazing for a first flash, you definitely have potential! I really liked how you used the looping background technique when Sonic was running, it took me ages to figure out how to do that lol! Anyways, the only thing I would recommend you do is up the quality of your sprites a bit for the next one. Anyways, good job!
thanks im workin on number 2 right now
i dn know
maybe it was my pc, the whole was going slow for some reason. mostly on the beach background. abyway good movie.
Not bad
For a sprite movie this is ok, the only thing i want to say is maybe you could speed things up a little. The animation is quite slow at times and makes the whole story slow down. Other than that you have done a good job!
i know it was 12 fps.... my next is 25 is dat alright?
I would say..
add speech bubbles, or make it easier to read what they are saying, also, speed things up a bit, I found myself waiting alot to see more text.
alright then i will in number 2 thanks
I'm gonna tell truth.
Everyone else gonna say u so, but I wanna tell it too.
It wasn't SO bad for 1st movie, but everyday there are like 10-20 first movies of random people. Don't try to make sprite movies if they're not very interesting or funny (it's still better than stick figures...).
k for the next 1 i will try n make it more dramatic
