i cracked up
i loved this flash but i fucking hate those commercials. and monkey576468, i think the whole point of it was to be short. lol
Author Comments
My first submission, and my first attempt at keyframe animation, so bear with me.
As you might be able to guess, i did the awful sound effect work all with my voice, aside from the smacking noise which was done with a hammer.
Uh.
Enjoy, I guess. Comments and criticism are appreciated.
playercharacter responds:
Hey, thanks for the positive feedback. I'm used to people not complaining about the length of my flash toons, but I'm starting to see that in order to avoid blamming, I should try and aim for a little longer.
I see what you're going for, chief
try to have a faster animation concept and better sounds. It was funny, but it's those little thing that'll get your stuff blammed. My first animation was slaughtered because of noise problems... I never made another one, but you dont have to go down the same road I did. : D your drawing style is cool, just work on faster smoother animations. and more sounds.
playercharacter responds:
Thanks! I'm already thinking of what obscure thing to make next, and I hope I'll be a bit better at animating by then.
Oh, and sorry about your animation, man.
Hm, pretty kewl
I must say, I really liked it. The animation was pretty professional, so was the drawing. The sound was, well, a bit unique but I can feel that you put all your heart in producing this sounds :D All in all, i think 8/10 should do it. Keep up the good work buddy.
ehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
ok for a first animation but u still need a lot of work it wasn't that funny either and im not sure if this is product pacemen or not
playercharacter responds:
Thanks for the feedback. I'll try to suck less in the future.
Parodies are different than product placement, for the record.
short
short but funny, 2 points of because of how short it is.