Needs serious work, but I love your vision
This flash had good action, though the whole elemental thing seemed too reminiscent of Avatar. Your shot ideas and setups are actually very well done, especially your music choice for this and last chapter, however, you have work to do on your anatomy drawings as well as animation in some areas. Also, this story is incredibly vague, but it's all good, because with time and work I can see this becoming something excellent. Keep up the good work, it's going somewhere man.