Well I know the first thing your probably going to notice is, how short it is. Well it ''WAS'' Longer, but my freaking power zapped out and I lost tons of works.. (Yea, taught me to save more frequently...). Anyway, Im going to go ahead and upload this, so I can just start on my other flash. Enjoy!
ok ... ok
uh... well first off... it was a fine idea.... uh... the motions need work.. like the running/walking and the "camera effect" at times was just too shakey like i see what you were trying to do but due to the not so good animation it didnt work to well.... so ya have fun :)
Needs some more work
This movie needs more options, it's cool that you can make buttons that do things but you need more to do, at least two options when the user has to click a button, otherwise there really isn't a point to us clicking the button since it will just make the same thing happen that would happen if the buttons weren't there.
The music was a bad choice for this flash, it's cool if you like that song but it didn't really go with this short movie.
Hmmm
I really liked it. I wish it was longer, it kind of just cuts off. Sucks you lost a lot of it.
What were you thinking
This really needs to be longer. There is no clear ending and it really is just a waste of space. Since your power went out and took most of your work with it, you should have either redone all of the lost work, or you should have just canned the project. This really is not worth anyone's time.
Need to work on the running and walking...
You should work on the character's walking and running.... they have flas htutorials on New Grounds. Look one up and you should find one of them that has something on it for walking... other than that, it was good.