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well i saw ur first movie and that 1 wuz okay but this 1s kinda boring teh same humor 2 and thats not funny anymore try making it beter next time
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hey thanks for the review on the first one. i might just start doing like alittle series out of these, they get better and funnier each time out you know. well i hope you like.
-Jared
A series?
Sorry, not with the same kind of joke. :(
Sorry
sorry but i had to 0 that, it could have been good, but the explosion needs way more detail and it was too short. Plus side it did make me laugh a bit. Just basically make it longer next time and it will be better.
It's not that bad
I know where everyone else is coming from but I think you just have your own style. I like the flash although it was kind of short but as far as a series I think you should go for it. Perhaps you'll get better. The only thing I think you need to work on is a story and stuff. Probably some dialouge would be good too. Anyways, good luck with the series!!!
you wanna start a series...
Don't... I mean maybe someone else could, and it might be funny and enjoyable. But for you, just don't.