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This is my first attempt to ever make a flash video, I know it's a tad choppy, but it was fun to make. I put about 100+ hours into this thing, and I am still trying to learn how to use Adobe Flash. I don't care if you give this a 5/5, I just want you to tell me what you truthfully think, and suggestions on how to make my future posts better would be highly appreciated.

Please keep the reviews clean ^^ Thank you, and I hope you enjoy.

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for a First...It was Amazing

I really enjoyed it and Can't wait to see what you have coming up next. If that is how your first video is, then I can't wait to see your future ones :)

Get some more FPS and this would've been even better, the ninja's on the buildings were the best part. But I think you got lazy and rushed through the rest since it was your first. Keep up the Good work. ^^


pretty just the animation that kinda sucked

two artists

To me this flash looked like there was two different artists involved. One of them was good and one bad. The good bits to me were some of the faster moving tunnel bits and the distant shot of an army jumping across the buildings. There were howerver a couple of bits that threw the animation timing a bit. The slow bit where he jumps on top of everyone and just after that I think there was another slow bit.The explosive bits could have been stylized better.
Take the good bits and dump the bad and youll have an excellent flash.

Tantalis329 responds:

Thank you ^^. There was only me working on it, but I agree with you, there were times I was tired and just trying to get a scene done. On my next project I will try to stop and take breaks when I feel that happening.

loved it!

ok this is definatly the best of my daily 5, really great vid:) this really had everything^^


Tantalis329 responds:

Thank you


that was a very good flash and i loved it, it had action and humor a great mix the fighting was solid and very intresting even though the art was simple this deserves the front page i would like to tell you how to make it better but i dont think i can it was just perfect but the stick figures arms should come from the neck area like connected to the head and not to the sides

overall it was a perfect flash i loved is 5/5

Tantalis329 responds:

Thank you very much =D I will look at other stick figure flashes too and work on it ^^

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3.72 / 5.00

Jul 12, 2008
1:57 AM EDT

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