i give you a one becase you were abel to animate it thats about as god as it was try a better story line.
For God's sake, If you're not Knox, don't use the same kind of figures as him. Not only does it makes your flash looks so much less original, his figures aren't great at all. He can get away with it because he was the first to popularize that style, and his camera quality is good. Now, it's just copying.
Now onto the actual flash. The animation was minor, the voice over quality was subpar and the video quality wasn't great. Definitely add more actual actions to the flash, and try to get a new mic (good mics don't have to be expensive, you can get some relatively cheap.) Cameras are expensive, so I can somewhat sympathize for the poor visual quality. If you would like to continue making movies, however, I'd suggest at least a decent webcam.
This flash wasn't great, but don't give up. Keep practicing and play around with new character figures nd I'm sure you'll come up with something much better. Good luck!
voice is stupid. and you cant see the clay good. quilety bad