It was alright
to short graphics where ok wasnt very good
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still need help with animation worked pretty hard well if anybody wants to help with animating
i'd really appreciate it. ugh comments are always appreciated and i hope you enjoy.
Uh...
The graphics where okay, but it was WAY too short.
I was like...
...whoa, thats my song. URL is http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/106287 , song is Ethereal Symphony. Thanks for using my song. Animation shows promise, though in the future I hope for more of a plot, smoother movements, dialog or noises maybe. Anywho, keep making flash, you'll learn as you go.
-AvatarKami
(Kami the Avatar)
getting better
better intro and stuff....try making the text fade in and out...make more of a story...graphics are good, if you added more you could be getting over a 3.0...lots of potential
LOL! Shiney Vagina!
Good animation and music but nothing else. Very short and not much of a plot. It was just a fetus floating around to some soothing sounds. The shiney vajayjay was funny though.