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Lil Spartan's Intro

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First I would like to thank Tink. This whole project started out when I watched the 3rd tutorial. I set forth to move on in my third film from stick figures into people using Tink's tutorials. About half way through the project I asked my coworkers if they wanted to voice act for me. Next thing I know I am making a project about us at work.


This is the intro for episodes. Also this is the third animation I have made, second I have put on the net, and first using people, not sticks.


Enjoy! And thanks TINK!!!!

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Underrated

First off I don't think you guys are getting fair scores. The guys in front of me giving you 0/10 aren't rating you as a whole. The concept (I'm assuming of course this is going to be a full series.) Is good, especially if this is a "portrait" of your workplace, lots of material to be taken from the workplace.

You still have some way to go with your animations/timing. I haven't looked at your otherwork but if you're just coming off doing stick animations then you're improving already.

Lastly the voices. I know they've been commented on already, but always double check before your actor(s) leave to make sure the sound quality is what you want for the character.

Can't wait to see the next installment. Take your time on it and don't rush, turn the doubters into believers.

8bitpimp responds:

Hey Thanks a lot. Yeah I learned a ton from this and will make the first episode soon. Putting all the stuff I learn into the next episode so hopefully it will get better.

Intro's Too Long

I agree with skaterabc. The intro needs to be cut down or cut out. I saw him put on a headband so slowly I said "fuck this noise".

ehh

i think the intro was too long. i closed it before it was finished and it was boring

self indulgent

I will give you a 2 for the time you put into it, but i can't really understand why you are asking for ours? I just sat thru 3 mins of a slow introduction that lead up to nothing. Maybe if this gets thru you will provide some kind of explanation. I am assuming you will make episodes starring these charecters, but I feel you should have included the 1st one with the intro.

Has Potential

Seeing as this was just an intro for something that hasn't even been made yet, I was afraid that it would suck, however, the intro could have been a bit quicker, but it does a good job of showcasing characters, and a bit of their personality. The only thing that seemed messy was the voice quality where the one character says "lets do this." That sounded like it was recorded over an xbox live headset. Other than that, this looks like it has the potential to be good.

8bitpimp responds:

Yeah I was at work when we recorded the voice and it was not loud enough so I had to make a recording of a recording. Didn't expect that problem but I will just have them speak up next time. Ill trim it up a lil so it goes faster I was trying to play the whole song out and got close but didnt make it.

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Jul 7, 2008
10:02 PM EDT