not bad
+1 for the effort
Author Comments
Something around seven months worth of work culminating in my longest, most complex short to date. I think it's pretty awesome, but what do I know, right? Seriously though, enjoy! Comments are appreciated.
Interesting.
Hurray for shrooms in class!
For the love of art
Your love of the art is clear. Very nicely done short film. I look forward to seeing more from you.
Cheers
Slackman responds:
Right back 'atcha. I'm truly ecstatic to see that my love for what I'm doing comes through!
nice
i liked it, but some parts where bitter bill was shifting his positon and talking seemed a bit slower than might have been better. also i think that after the guy was really shocked when the animation started moving, he wasnt as shocked as he could have been. but otherwise, it worked well. i like the FbF and how it was smooth.
Slackman responds:
I'm glad you liked it. I'd like to think my pacing and animation skills have improved since I made this. He probably should have been more shocked. Oh well. Something to remember for the future!
Wow That Looks Good!!
Animation: A very nice blend of fbf and tweenings.
Plot: Well not very original or great, but nice anyway.
Music: Really nice and goes well with movie, and extra kudos for your making it with your bro, too.
Slackman responds:
Animation: I do my best! Thank you very much.
Plot: I'm not going to try and argue that the plot was original, but it served its purpose...
Music: Nothing like a little brotherly bonding over a jam session!