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It's a parody flash of a comic.
There's a secret button, if you don't find it, it's in a black scene (kalma's there too)
Enjoy!
at least..
there was some sort of a plot.. better than your 2nd one ill tell you that much.. which is kinda sad. tips to get better and recieve better scores.
1. better voice acting.
I could hardly understand what was being said. i caught "in my house" thats about it...
2. the story needs to be longer.
By the time i figured out what was going on she was being eaten and it was over.
3. perhaps a better plot with which you can run with.
i will give you props on the artwork tho. I cannot draw that well so good job on that. but perhaps more detail to the characters.
yenke-kyo responds:
It's a parody of a page, just one. Thats why it's short and has got a bad plot.
Not nice voice acting because I'm spanish.
That was fun
but try some sonic music because thats what she looks like
not naruto
sorry if you like naruto :{
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