that is what drugs do to you children

that was good plz make another

Um..

At first I thought to myself "how did this not get blamed?" But by the time it got to the end I wanted it to go on a little bit more. I don't know why, but there is just something about this that just draws you in. It's almost hypnotizing.

I saw this flash yesterday.

You have now improved on it, I voted a 5 for improving, it said Congratulations this is the last vote needed for it being protected, so thank me. :)

2/10

It seems like you have just learned flash and wanted to submit your first full creation. That's not an insult from me to you, but an observation, most likely correct. While it was not bad for a first, it will earn you a bad rep if you submit your early work first. Many people save that early work for after they get a rep for being good. You should do the same, to save your own name from hating.

By no reason should you stop doing it, just don't submit anything until you have more practice. You can become a successful author here on NG, so go for it, but keep your rep intact by waiting until you're great before adding your submissions.

What can I say..

When I first saw this movie I thought,
"This is crap.."
Then I saw you had summited it twice (At the same time) so I blew the whislte,
Now I've see you've improved it:
- Music
- Play button
It just looked alot better.
7 / 10