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So this is a trailer and I am going to tell you the story from the beginning.
I improved animation and graphic a little and the flash also has a voice acting...
Voice actor: Xtermin8r13 (good job!)
Thank you for watching!


twas decent...but sort of bad too

There are a couple things that bothered me. Now when the person is talking I hate reading what the people are saying and having it wrong even if its just a simple differnce. In the video you have the words yeah and you saying yes it just kind of annoys me.

The only other thing is the animation. I mean I always hate telling artists their animation isnt that great because I am not anywhere near a dece animator. But the fact still remains that the animation was bad. And nice FF7 sword being fought with....the only thing is that it sort of looks ridiculous because its soo big that it makes the pic just looks a little bit silly.

Good story tho so far, you had me hooked, sun and then a red moon disappearing, why did it disappear? we shall find out. Some random cloaked man carrying an amulet down a hallway then laying it on a cloaked person....I am very interested you just need to fix the writing portion and then maybe the animation as well.

Vova-Zknight responds:

1. OK next time I'll do without subs.
2. Animation is not near best standarts I agree, so I'll work on it.
3. You'll understand every thing in the episodes be sure.

It has potential.

The idea was interesting, but there are a few problems that did some serious damage to your score.

First off, the music often cut off in a bad place, making it sound choppy and just... not so well done. If you absolutely can't let a song continue until it ends, try to refrain from stopping it in the middle of the crescendo.

The in-movie text... grammar. That's all I can say. Grammar. Fix it. Please.

Some of the animations could go a lot smoother, even if you are a novice at Flash. May I suggest using the GIMP (gimp.org) to create a gradient when his skin is turning purple instead of filling in a bunch of squares?

Voice acting was good, but just put a LITTLE more emotion into the tones.

Overall, like I said, it has potential. As it is, though, it just doesn't work.

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Vova-Zknight responds:

Thank you.
1.I agree the music stoped a little not in time.
2.GIMP - I'll think about it.

I'll work on it.

Looks Great!

I was afraid it was going to be one of those crappy trailers. I'm pleasantly surprised that I was wrong. The music was great and so is the animation. I look forward to seeing the whole thing. Good work.

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Vova-Zknight responds:

Thank you!

Not that good...

The flash wasn't that good. The graphics sucked, except for the sword. I don't even know what it's about! Other than something coming soon.

Vova-Zknight responds:

OK OK that's sometimes happend)

hey read this plz

i gave u five stars cause it was so funny wen they were funny it look like my sons drawings lolololol oh and at the beginning turn down the music i little down it makes your '''voice acting''' sound bad

Vova-Zknight responds:

I read it thx.

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3.22 / 5.00

Jul 4, 2008
5:09 PM EDT
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