for a 1st
better than mine, which is my only, cause macromedia 8 is hard and i get agrivated each time i use it.
but fake and real DO work, and is clever as long as it is used right, other words....
9/10, 4.5/5
Author Comments
Sniping in a secluded area should be pretty easy... provided you've been given the right info.
This is my first flash to Newgrounds. Hope you enjoy.
Please rate reasonably, and I'll take any advice from you "experts" out there. (Just kidding, I'll take any)
2:32
GenArmegeddon responds:
Thanks man!
It's Alright.
The Graphics Were A MajorDownfall...
Then Again, It's Your First Flash So..
The Plot Was Very Good. I Like Snipers :D
The Words And Actions Were A Little Off.
The Pictures Were Just Wierd.
Real/Fake Doesn't Work :D
So...
6/10 3/5 :D
/\/DT\/\
GenArmegeddon responds:
Thanks for the critisism. I need it.
ok, could use some work
not to bad, but not great. right in the middle. joe's voice was kinda quiet, i couldn't hear him most of the time, maybe add subtitles or something? it was a 6/10 job overall for me.
GenArmegeddon responds:
Yeah i saw that, it was because of the Ambiance, it dulled the voices.
I'm gonna be a rebal
you can never make it in newgrounds leave forever.
I'm kidding with some practice and trying hard you'll be on of the best
5/5
The only thing i can say
Make the animation better maybe redo it cause it was really funny nice work other then that.
GenArmegeddon responds:
It seems thats what everyone is saying 0_o.
But thanks for the review.
Credits & Info
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3.73 / 5.00
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