Hey guys. This is my first flash on Newgrounds! I made everything in this flash with my pal Amanda. We made up the songs, like I'm In Love With A Girl Named Karen. If you're confused, wait for the second episode. Roy owned a radio show with his brother Tomis and Tomis left that day and left Roy alone. Just for one day. I can't tell you what made the station explode. You'll see XD Sprinkles is Charlie's pet. Yeah. And Steve is my best friend. I made him a character XD He'll be in most of my flashes somewhere X3 he's cute~ Right. Ok.
Needs work
The sound was one thing that really needs to be cleaned up. I could also tell that while you were making this, you weren't able to keep your composure. And the conversation was getting too long and monotonous to the point that I didn't even finish the video. I would try again with something else and a little more thought.
Thanks for telling me exactly what I should improve on ^-^ I'll work on it : D
It needs more
But for your first animation, that was pretty good, not many people have a preloader for their first flash.
Thanks, yeah, it was my first flash. I don't really know a lot yet. The second one should be more enjoyable. Thanks : D
this was a bad production!
i did not enjoy this rather un-enjoyable film