This is a comical comparison between two lifestyles...the hard working "Beaver" and the lazy "Bear." This portrayal is much closer to reality than what is generally publicly accepted as the truth. Which one will live the happier stress free life? Watch and see.
The animation was primarily done in Toon Boom using a Wacom tablet. It was animated without the use of tweens. It was instead animated frame by frame.
Long load so please be patient. :P
Nice try!
The moral of the story is to be fat and ugly and lazy and technology will save you from having to try to survive.
It wasn't a bad story at all, you could work on animation and the choppiness and other made up adjectives.
Good luck with your future works brosive.
Lags alot dude
You've set the frame rate too low and your animation , as a result , looks too choppy.
Thus, you didn't compress this flash at all so it is far too large for its size - 9.6MB is too much for this! Because you didn't compress , you made the viewer wait unnecessarily too long and this will negatively impact your score.
Furthermore, I'd like to point out that you need a preloader. Animations without a preloader are a telltale sign of an inexperienced animator. This also hurt your score.
Finally, try tweening . All of this FBF was unecessary for this animation. Not only tweening would've made it look better but also would have saved you time. Generally, IMO , you should only use FBF for special effects or fight scenes - other than that it's just a hassle.
Hey I hope this helped. Good looking man.
Lol, that's funny
I really liked it, I thought it was very funny.