Good.
A good movie has a BGM that matches the motion and emotions! This song, Kan Kan from O2Jam (which I play) really fits in here, plus a good animation and graphic quality.
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this is the flash that i presented for my final project for my 2d class
it isn't that really good quality kind of flash, cos i'm still new in this 2d stuff, but..
hope u enjoy it
if any of you guys have any advice that can help improve my flash skill.
please tell me....
thank you =D
edit : no white bg , thx to dirtshake for the warning =D
aliimran responds:
thank you for the comment !! i appreciate it.
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Great
It was really really great and funny!
aliimran responds:
thank you, a 10 score is too much me though , but thank you anyway.
and thx for commenting this flash !!
i love it!
good animating and quite energic, i like it!
Good job
Not bad, but fix some things
You have a great start for someone who's new to flash.
Your animation was pretty good. Surprisingly you were better at frame by frame than tweening so I would say keep up the fbf. Your fbf was pretty smooth and looked convincing. YOur tweens however, especially when the main character was conducting, were not too good. Work more on drawing the parts of the arm in a way to look convincing instead of just using ovals or something. I would say keep up the fbf.
Another thing that stood out was how the background image or colors or whatever would not cover the whole stage in flash. There was some white areas off to the sides which took away from the flash as a whole. It is easy to fix this, only a matter of making sure the background image covers the whole stage. If your going to move the background during the animation it's best to make a large image that covers way more than the stage. PM me if you need some help with this.
Overall it was a good movie though. Keep up the practice and you'll make some quality flashes here.
aliimran responds:
OMG , its true...but its weird, i already preview this flash before submitting it to newgrounds in flash 8, and no empty line were seen!!
but when i preview it here it has one!!!
hmm, but for now....thank you for your comment advice sir, ill go recheck it again!!