Good for a bit
It's really enjoyable, but kind of limited. Of course, it's better than anything I could ever make.
Author Comments
Version 1.0
Alright everyone, heres how it works!
You've got a room with a poor starving artist dude named Matthew, and his cannibalistic, insane alter-ego Murk! Click on their heads to change their expression; their hands to get some fun equipment out; the desk to play with its contents and Murks pants for...well you'll see soon enough!
The speech bubble at the bottom can be clicked to edit.
If you wanna move Murk around, click and drag his torso. Don't even bother with Matt though, hes one lazy guy.
Make lots of fun comics for me, k?
And heres YOUR chance to get in on the action!
If you've got a deviantArt account, go to my page at www.murkhellsing.devianta rt.com and see how you can take part in making more comics, and winning prizes as well.
Expect updates! Make requests for more items! Get messy!
stupid game
the props were bad and can you only draw that face here are some more things that are wrong
no music
bad background
no point
Murk responds:
"Wrong" or your opinion? Two different things, really.
Thanks for the terrible score. :)
Decent
Could use some drawing work, and btw what happened to Necromancer and Druid? I liked that one and when r u gonna release ep. 2?
Decent score. Preferrable for next time that you make this, make it a comic maker not a comic page maker.
Murk responds:
I finished most of Necromancer and Druid 2, but its so old now I wanna redo the thing! Its a bad habit when I make longer projects - I tend to outgrow what I've got so far.
Lacking Vision
You've reall limited yourself here. Let me just say that your art is extremly good and a pleasure to look at. But there is just so little content that its barely an interactive experience.
Add more frames, more positions, more quotation bubbles and you'll have a masterpiece on your hands. And if you need anything AS wise, I'll be more than happy to help. Heck, with your art skills any collab with you would be a success.
Murk responds:
Well thankyou. I've only learnt the basics of actionscript, so for now I'm just trying to put that knowledge to good use. I've got plenty of more ambitious stuff I'd like to do in the future.
One important question:
Why are they identical twins? Is it too hard for you to draw a different face? Also, I see no value in this for anyone who doesn't like your comic ahead of time. You do have a whole lot of options for the characters accessories, and they are pretty creative, but there is no point in this, since it's all just a single frame.
To improve, add multiple frames and more interactive speech bubbles. Try the standard comics font instead of whatever it is you have there. Add a few different poses instead of the same pose with different expressions. A couple of other characters or props would also help make it more interesting. You have the creative ability to do this, which is something many people on here lack-- use it!
Murk responds:
I enjoyed making something over the last couple of hours and I posted it online. I don't see the harm in that. While I can certainly see where you're coming from, I think I deserve a better than a 2. And you definitely sound like you need a hug.
Last time I checked, Alter-Egos are supposed to look the same. Unless they're furries or something. :)