really good
i loved it but if you could improve on the timing that would be great
Author Comments
Why am i drawing crappy you might ask.
Becuase my hand got shit with a b-b gun and it hurts to much for me to draw so thats why.
Also since i have used up my 2 portal submissons im using this.
Could be improved
~~REVIEW~~
This was ok but could be improved, such as some "SUBTITLES" you did present some good characters, and a funny plot just needs abit more on that aspect of things
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some subtitles
~~OVERALL~~
Funny but needs more
~X~
Well...
Could have had a little more and mouth didnt fit words at all
Just two things.
I'm only writing a review cause i know it's going to pass judgment, but the only things I have to say is it may need to be a few minutes longer....oh and better sound thingies. Overall i gave you a 8/10 (the other two points aren't on cause you gotta fix the two problems i listed), The animation was awsome though! ^-^
Timing was off...
Other than that, great flash.