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AmazinGuy: The Prologue

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This is the beginning of a series I'm making, I just made it to explain the main character and some of the plot. I know it's pretty boring, but I'll make sure the next one is a lot more action-y.

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Not Bad :D

You seem to have put in a lot of effort into this. I liked the whole madness violence feel. The sound effects were good, and the storyline was easy to follow.
Some things to look out for:
-Try increasing the FPS so things run a little quicker because the whole floating bike thing would seem better with a quicker exit
- Perhaps a sound track? some music may have jumped up the tension in it.
- Maybe you could record some vocals for the next one. Give it a better atmosphere and may get more people to acknowledge your flash work.

Otherwise I think this was really good and you deserve a pat on the back! :D

Its ok...

But some bits don't fit in - well 3 that I counted:
1. Why did the lights go out at the start
2. He "floated" away from his bike?
3. How can there be blood on the knife at the start. Surely blood on it from past fights would have dried so it wouldn't be dripping?

Anywho, I voted a 4 and in the comment I'll give it a 8.

hmm

It's like a sketchy version of ThingThing or Madness.

Not great.

All right, the animation was poor, nothing seemed to flow,
and the letters that I was supposed to read really bored me.
I did like the gun designs though, it looks like you put a lot of
time into them.
I also loved the invisible stairs that he runs up when he's on the motorbike.
Reminds me of my own acid trips.
Five out of ten, because I'm nice.

Not so amazing...

The animation was too slow paced and there was not enough sound effects or you just need some kick ass music. And the knife that was bleeding in the beginning? I don't get it.

Pretty good, but still needs improvement.

Cheers!

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4,121
Votes
9
Score
2.67 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jun 26, 2008
5:06 PM EDT