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the characters are based on actual people, its my first flash so if you have tips..i would really appreciate that.

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nice dude very imaginative

AWESOMELY IMAGINATIVE!!!

this video was great!!!!and it was only ur first time making a flash?! i agree with the other reviews it was definitely original.......u should make more and get into the characters more but this one was very kool(choose a song that doesnt appear on naruto lol)

very original

I like it and I like the song

Yay!

Gewd 4 your fist time. I really did like it just wish it was drawn a little better but overall i gave it a 10/10. Just need a little practice is all but it was still awsome! (lol, i sound like a teacher)

Very good for a first-timer

The ideas involved are definitely original, which is always a good thing. The animation was quite well done, too, and the music went well with it. However, the best thing is your style; I've always enjoyed watching flash movies that looked as though every frame was drawn from scratch with a pencil (or at least the pencil tool in the program). There's certainly a lot of potential here, and I hope to see it in action.

Just to be the usual nit-picky reviewer I am, you could do with some colour (although for this particular flash, black and white works surprisingly well), and while the graphics were good, there is still some room for improvement. If you need any help, try going to the forums and asking directly; someone there should be able and willing to help you. Still, a pretty good flash movie compared to most, and a phenomenal effort for a first try. I reckon you could go a long way, and I'm looking forward to seeing your submissions appearing on the front page fairly often. 3/5.

alemuji responds:

thank you..its my first and it took about a week and half.

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Jun 24, 2008
8:56 PM EDT