Ah So short... so simple.... so... Not bad.
It was short and simple, but I actually really liked it for a short lil animation. Good work! Try to do a bit more though. Always try to do your best work with stuff like this on Flash to show people.
I want to give a special thanks to my friend lolsharks who I think isn't on here. But what tha heck, I want to thank him for teaching me three things...
1.Changing FPS
2.Backgrounds
3.Sounds
I didn't have any idea of how to use them. And by the way, this is my first animation ever, but I do have experience in Pivot. Which gives me the added bonus. Please laugh 'til ya leak! If people could please rate, I don't want this to be blammed!
Ah So short... so simple.... so... Not bad.
It was short and simple, but I actually really liked it for a short lil animation. Good work! Try to do a bit more though. Always try to do your best work with stuff like this on Flash to show people.
Meh
Your sticks changed size throughout the animation. Make some guidelines on a separate layer if you have to. Make a background, and take your time with animation. It's a tricky thing.
Admirable
Certainly was a fluid animation, nothing too extreme. I think there was a slight bug where the words that were coming up in the second half of the flash were going a little too fast, perhaps you could try and fix that. Good luck.
not to bad
it appears to be your first flash and thats pretty cool keep improving youeself though dont stop here! i'd like to see more than sticks from you! keep it up!