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C.O.S. Part 3

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We also tried to use a smaller window size to draw in this time. Tell us whether you prefer animations in smaller window size or flash's default window size. This is the Third Part of our City of Sticks (C.O.S.) series. Enjoy! And be sure to wait till after the credits, theres some stuff there also.


Animations and Story by 123tom23
Actionscripting and Suggestions by projectpaatt
Music: John Powel - Treadstone Assassins
Danger Ahead by ParagonX9 and Shadows Of The Sky by ParagonX9

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Awsome music

~~REVIEW~~
Very good choice of music on this one paragon has always been fave of mine and glad you used it here, it really made the flash flow with everything else, and for that you get an 8 so nice job indeed,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I liked it as is

~~OVERALL~~
Great music decent flash.

~X~

medium quality, good start =)

ok, first off the bad bits first (i like to end on a good note =P)
1. the movements are way off in parts
2. when the sticks are fighting its stop go stop go, this looks weird and isnt natural try to ease the movements and make them flow into each other, trust me it helps =)
3. the car part with the police from birds eye view isnt great my advice would be not to use actual images (like the road) you can get much better and more appealing results if you draw it yourself. and maybe the birds eye view thing wasnt the best choice, i would suggest as it is happening animating it from different angles.

Good Bits (woo!)

1. Nice story! Quite creative in some aspects but i can see which anims (as a guess) you get the inspiration from.
2. Nice guns, (assuming u didnt trace over actual ones)
3. Nice Choice of music, it added that bit of bouncyness and rhythm to the anim.

overall its quite balanced with3 good 3 bad, good job! =D

It was ok.

Smooth animations, but things didn't seem to flow right. I liked your attempt at some cool camera shots, but most didn't shine throw all the way. The overview scene of the cars was terrible, sorry it just was. And it was very long. All in all, you should maybe try to keep the camera in one place, or have less jumps with it. You still have a nice flash, but it could be much better.

Nice one

Nice animations, awesome moves, good music. Maybe, if it was a little longer...

Awesome!

Twas an awesome flash, keep up the work! - maybe a bit longer though

Credits & Info

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Faves:
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Votes
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Score
3.89 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jun 23, 2008
5:42 AM EDT