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The Bank Robbery (Prt.1)

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READ THIS BEFORE WATCHING!!!


Hey, Ive been working on this for quite awhile, but for some reason my flash program's been fucking up and isn' t working properly right now, and I may have to delete it, blah, blah, blah... so anyways, I didn't want to risk getting rid of what I had finished on this project so far, so basicly I'm submitting this unfinished, calling it part 1, and when I get my flash working again, I'll finish it and call it part 2. SO PLEASE don't rate this a 0 or something because it ends at a bad point... oh and one more thing, my voice acting isn't very good hehe...

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Needs some work

~~REVIEW~~
This was decent but would get abit confusing and hard to understand at times, a subtitle box would help greatly

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Subtitles

~~OVERALL~~
Decent but needs more

~X~

Not bad

I couldn't really understand what was being said at some times, maybe a subtitle and a bit more dialog would help the story.

And everyone knows the traditional bank robbery gun is no other then the hardy Ak-47 kalishnikov with a folding stock and a nice 200 round mag.

The security guy didn't seem to have mouth movement while speaking, if you have a little trouble with mouth motions try casting down on him from another angle. like from behind facing the monitors, so you can't see his mouth anyways.

All in all I can tell a lot of attempt has been made, it's not easy doing a solo attempt. You only get better the more you do.

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3,554
Votes
2
Score
3.75 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jun 22, 2008
11:36 PM EDT