Animation / Graphics - For some reason, even though the animations was awkward at best, I really liked the style. I thought the style was really fitting for the flash. The animation was by the way pretty original.
Story - As you stated the film made little to no sense, but it was really random and if made up for itself with the humor. I found myself laughing as I watched the movie just because I had no clue what was going on.
Audio - Not only was the audio pretty funny, it ran together well with the animation. Not too much more to say about it then that.
Overall, not bad, but very random. I would like to see more of your animations so good luck with future animations that you submit to newgrounds.
- GS -