Its ok
Yeah, pretty basic but it works. Need to work on animation but the music was nice. You should carry on flashing just think it through a bit more.
Author Comments
Hi everyone this is my first ever flash movie, it's about a guy who needs to get to work and causes some trouble along the way, hope this dosen't get blammed. I also wouldn't mind some opinions on weather I should carry on with flash or am I wasting my time. Anyway enjoy (hopefully)
KI1 responds:
Yeah...
good
was good for your first flash ever, and the animation with the cop was weird but good, and you did a mistake with the clock at the end, the short one is suposed to be in the middle when it's 7:30, and well, that's your only mistake.
KI1 responds:
Oops, I didn't see that mistake I think I have to practise my clock drawing. Thanks for reveiwing.
nice music
i really liked ur music and for ur first flash music i really liked it. i had a problem wit there being no movement when da guy ran though, and when he fell he landed perfectly which doesnt make sense. but good job hope it doesnt get blammed!
KI1 responds:
Yea thanks I thought the music was pretty cool too and as for the animation, it's my first ever flash and I'm working on it. Thanks for your reveiw.
Not bad....
Not bad, Nice flash to be your first.Just keep working on the animations!
KI1 responds:
Don't worry I'm working on it =P
petty good
for first flash...adds some colours and sounds. It was one the better first submissions, i have see newly.
KI1 responds:
Yea, I think I might get into colours soon. Thanks
