nice
very good, i like ur style. neb.
Author Comments
My second animation. I am learning whilst submitting :D.
It is the first animation of an upcoming series to Newgrounds (hopefully). These are short animations about a group of (mouthless) creatures who find themselves in different situations each time. In this first animation, the characters are introduced one after the other. Each animation has a different ending. Some are quite odd and random, some may have a story behind them.
Special thanks to Ryan Lancaster in teaching me the ways of motion tween. Your a great animating buddy Lankie!
Enjoy!
Doodle :3
This is great! You're learning fast! :D
YES!
I gave you advice for this animation AND YOU DIDN'T INCLUDE ME IN THE CREDITS!?
NOT EVEN A SPECIAL THANKS!!!?
you'll pay for this...in...blood!
lol not really! ^^ well done on your second animation Richard, you got some original ideas and they show well, It could be a bit more polished and less repetition in sound effects, but other than that for a second animation ever its rarther good!
Keep it up Rich! Just ask if you ever need help again! ^^
Lankie
DoodleProductions responds:
Lol thanks lankie! Now ge your animations on here!
All in all...
not bad. There are some neat Graphics in this one. The Sound sounds well. ^^The humor is one thing you have to work a bit on, but okay. It have to be a bit more than random appearances of this blob thingys with funny noises and Sounds. Some more action would be fine or kinda funny dialog about random things dunno. ^^
And last but not least, this short is kinda large in Filesize compared to its lenght. I think you have to do something to make it more compact ^^
But overall 7/10 go on with it I'm curious for the next Installation of this series :D ^^
DoodleProductions responds:
Thanks for the review. I agree with you. But its not supposed to be MEGA funny. But yeah I'll take your advice into account.
NICE
For a second submission that was AWESOMELY made. =] Very nice, I look forward to seeing more from you.
DoodleProductions responds:
Thanks a lot! :D