That was alright! =)
Very good animation! I can see plenty of potential, so keep up the good work.
I like the ending."THAT WAS PATHETIC. HA HA!"
Author Comments
I have no idea what happended with the other movie that I put up, but here's something more recent. It is kind of a spoof of Xiao Xiao, but it was really just to try the new soundpack. I think the animation is a lot better than smashland. oh, and I tried speeding it up by 6 fps to see if NG would still slow it down...
-UPDATE-
thanks for everyone who voted 6 or 7, I really apreciate all the animation tips. Oh, and I took Gillespie's advice and added an icon. Also, for everyone who complains that this is too short, you have failed to read the title.
-ANOTHER UPDATE-
updated the nelson laugh. Should be a lot funnier now.
It was ok
You did good on your try. Make the sticks a bit decent a little. Like use line tools and eliptical scale. But other than that this is pretty good.
it was alright
it's not too much different than most other stick fights, though given that fact that it's a short, there's not a whole lot you could cram into it. it wasn't all that bad though, maybe next time use thinner lines for the sticks so you can see the movements better, but that's about it.
I see potential
Okay, I can see a good idea in this, but it's shrouded within overly sketchy drawing and a slightly underdeveloped animation style. Here's my challenge: Improve on your animation, create some distinct characters, then come back. I promise you that you will recieve much better ratings.
NOOOO NOT ANOTHER STICK FIGHT!!!
ok dude it's good that your getting out there and posting vids but please come up with somthing original and don't post LAME stick fights that are poorly drawn and waaay too short! there are already enuff of them on NG don't be A noob take your time and make somthing worth watching ok?!?
1/10---the sound effects were--ok?
-N.C.B.
Genogenesis7 responds:
way too short? you should've read the title properly!