i got to say, you're the first person i've seen to submit a flash cartoon of the experimental film project by NIN. unless there are others that i've not seen before.
the idea behind it that goes along w/ the music was perfect. and the mood was right. the only problem was the part where the door was opening to the outside world. it would've been better. that's all i have on there. excellent job on this.
thank you very much. I definitely agree with you about the door shot. this was also a project for college, and i ended up with one day to make the whole 2nd half! This, of course, meant zero sleep, which admitedly did result in some lazy shots. hehe :)
Loved the movie as much as i loved NIN, good luck in the contest and let us know how it turns out.
But next time you might wanna be consistent with y'r line thicknesses, cuz the thin lines were perfect for y'r style, but then there was a shot of the man's face where he had his hand on his cheek, those had noticably thicker lines.
Thanks muchly. Yes, I agree about the lines. I have a tendancy to change styles in the middle of projects, or just on certain shots. In earlier animations it was a lot worse, so hopefully it will get better with time :)
I truly liked it. I use to listen to NIN all the time and im sure your video will be apreated. What i got out of it is the man in the room he is the ghost. A ghost is real the man is real but he, he is not a man because he is no longer a part of the world of the living. He himself metaphoricly is a ghost. He longs for life outside of his self inflicted death but he is traped by a driving force that conpelles him to stay. Brilliant. I want to see more films like this one
Thanks! Your take on the message moved me very much! Yes, look out for more in the future. I don't tend to stick to doing the same thing though, I like to just open a completely different door and take a jog through it.
oh sorry i fell asleep. lol nah im being harsh. it ok. way to slow tho man....spice up ur life.
spice up your life, everybody here we go!
Thanks for your advice, but personally I think the pace was just right :)
pretty good stuff. it's interesting to see an animation; the vast majority of entries have been straight video. In fact I did a video entry for the same track :P
Overall good job though!
Thanks. Have you a link of your entry? I'd like to see it.