Lol

Quite amusing but overall completely random

Graphically it's not the best, but at least these images moved, even if they were only tweens, it's an improvement. Still need to move on from the importing of JPegs, and draw things for yourself, that would greatly improve the look of your movies.

The sound was just a bit low to be heard easily, but I got it. I did laugh at the whole randomness of it all though. Pretty funny way telling stories, it' pretty good.

I liked it, but there is still room for major improvements.Work on it, and I'm sure I'll love them even more :D

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More Work Needed

This really needs much more work, there isn't really much animation, though you do have some here and the graphics aren't really all that great. I mean sure it could be good if you had a much funnier plot to it, but this really seemed like you where trying a little too hard to do something random, but didn't really come out too well, the voice could have been better, this was too deep, slow and hard to hear.

It was also bad how you didn't draw a whole lot in many parts of this, or you drew something that wasn't really related too well, you should make things somewhat relevent and draw all the way if you are going to do something. I mean, if you are too lazy to draw, take up something like sprites or something, lol. Overall, much work is needed.

1/5

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...Needs work...

Alot.

First off, the speakonia voice you used was close to impossible to understand, please, do have the silence in the next one.
Secondly, this had almost no animation, the closest thing to animation i saw was the Pokeball going towards the penis.
Thirdly, and sadly, the best drawn thing in this was the Peach at the end, and even that wasn't great.
The fourth and final thing was the story. What went on with that, I hope it was supposed to be random and kinda stupid.

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Well, the speakonia voice is slower, but also a lot deeper, makeing it as hard to understand as before... speakonia really isn't the tool to use if you want to have decent sounding voices.

The graphics in here are quite bad. And I'm not talking about the stick figures, as those kind of figures can look pretty funny - and they do look funny in your flash, because you also work with facial expressions here. I'm talking about the images that moved across the screen. That always looks very bad and as if you didn't put any effort whatsoever into your flah.
You should try and draw these things yourself, even if they may look crappy. It's better than some images moving around the screen.

I like the random storylines you come up with. Randomness tends to be very funny and I can get a good laugh or two out of things that are randomly thrown together.

I'm interested in part 4, as you've said that you will stop using speakonia and start using subtitles. Lets see how that works out!

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Needs a lot of work.

I don't know if there's really anything positive I can say about this submission. It looked like a bunch of low-quality .jpg files thrown together without so much as a motion tween, the Speakonia voice was quite hard to understand due to an excessively low pitch (try using a different voice, maybe something like "Adult Male #1, American English" at a medium pitch and speed: it would make it more understandable), the sound didn't sync up well with the graphics near the end, it needlessly brought out overused 4chan memes, and it lacked any sort of cohesive storyline whatsoever. I'm assuming that you were making an attempt at random humor here, however it's just not funny. I strongly suggest that, before submitting another movie of this sort, you improve both your Flash and writing skills.
0/5, 0/10.
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