EHH
i liked it, some dumb humor (which i like). but overall it was pretty good...
Author Comments
i found this on my computer (i made it about 9 months ago) and this is acually the real first video ive ever made before i really learn anything in my flash class. i know its not really good, the whole thing only uses motion tweens. this was a flash for my english class as a project (our subjects were on thing relating to 1920) and i also used some south park art style, i think my everyone liked it best since everyone else had posters and other stuff, but this did get me an A+
That was odd
~~REVIEW~~
Well that was odd but still entertaining, the character was ok but maybe abit more detail next time, and more differant scenes would be nice aswell
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More character detail and more scenes
~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining and odd little flash
~X~
less shape tools
to clean up your sprites use the paintbrush tool and just change the softness to like 50 and free hand with a mouse or preferably a tablet. Also background music of some sort please!
Not Bad
It's actually strangely funny in a way. I like the humor. PEZ IS ONE OF THE MOST IMPORTANT INVENTIONS OF THE 20'S!!!!!
Cool flash!!
It's a great idea to list up some inventions of 1920! Your animation style is great but you have to make a preloader or download one from newgrounds.... Maybe background music would make the whole thing better,.... but great flash!! 8/10 5/5!