unique
it was okay but not great
some parts were funny and the voices were pretty cool
other than that it could be better
Author Comments
This is episode four of Lyson's Life. It's called "Cher Your Happiness". Lyson comes home disappointed from Dean not showing up to hang out because he has to bid on a Bjork record. Lyson then gets more disappointed dropped on him.
This is more than likely my last flash animation. I love making flash but I absolutely dislike throwing audio in there. I cannot make voices, sync, or make my mic sound half reasonable.
Please don't stop.
I think you do a great job with the voices. They're not, like, professional, but they have their own unique feel to them that really jives with the mood of your stories. Quality will grow gradually in your work over the years, but you have to keep at it. No one is born knowing how to work mics and sync voices. You have a real talent for writing funny and interesting scripts. Don't give up on that :)
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very little to be interested in... I didn;t really see a point.
room for improvement
the redeeming point of this flash is the voice work. i don't see why you dislike it or why you say you cannot make voices. it was well done though you can add some lip sync to improve it, with practice i am sure you would get it. A little more animation would also be a plus, like add diffrent camera angles or zoom, etc. well 6/10 nothing special but a flash none the less. don't give up... keep trying