better...
ok at least your getting better! Also good music (mario Rpg)
looking forward to the next episode...
Author Comments
I took everyones advice to make my flash a little better! i hyped up the storyline and added some more
characters! also the quiality is beter and the video moves quite smoother. I also added a play button.
the next video will include:
-credits button
-longer video
-new party members
-and a shocking truth!
stay tuned on the website for more info! also If you have ideas for characters tell me over EMAIL (avalar_uzimaki@yahoo.com ) or just leave a review
THANKS FOR WATCHING!
eternalclash responds:
thanks! ^-^
It could be...
So much better.Keep at the animating and you will soon get the jist.
Err well i could'nt bare the corny music to much for me XD
eternalclash responds:
well im glad you think its better. I'll make remakes once i get beter but for now im just practicing to get the hang of it. next episode will be GREAT!
Better then I thought it would be- but not great
I don't think it will be blammed. I like the idea of the plot. But the sprites you have size up to differently rather then being proportionate. Also it looks like there from different gaming areas. You jump from place to place to fast without a logical explanation of how some of these worlds were found, got mixed, or clashed their characters. But you got a bright future, if you work hard.
eternalclash responds:
ok I'll take the critizism(sp) and use it in the future thanks! i hope im gettting better!
Sound
thats all i have to say.
eternalclash responds:
lol tell me something i dont know...
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