Nice little cartoon

Sound was the issue, as you know

but aside from that, it was a well done little flash and I enjoyed it.

good work!

decent

That was actually pretty neat, only it needs sound and music, but you already know that I suppose. The animation was really great, the shadowing gave it a nice touch. And maybe instead of eating the flower, eat the blue guy cause at first thats what I was expecting. But whatever, do what you think is best.

pretty good for your first.

my first was horrible, and i still havent made a adecent flash... anyways, like the guy before me, i reccomend adding some sound to it, maybe a little backround music that loops into the credits, nothing special. Good job, keep at it:)

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Ths really needs sound

nice artwork...

but no sound. I'm sorry, this flash isn't enough without any sounds. =( Try to add some and maybe a some music in the "credits" and I'll gladly will let it pass. =) Try the audioportal for music and soundclips, well there are 1000:s of sites providing free audioclips. Or better, record 'em yourself!
- Remake, reupload and if you have any luck it will get through!