uninteresting
i was just bored watching, plus knees exist
Author Comments
Alright let's keep things short.
I'm taking more interest in animation so I'm starting to animate more than doing hentai. This flash took me quite a while to make. I didn't work full time tho. It's basically a remake of my first animation (Death Eagle) with a lot of stuff changed. (Such as enemies, locations, etc).
Anyways, the flash is short but I made it the same length as the music. Leave a review on what I can improve! I respond to all reviews.
The song is from the game Golden Sun 2: The Lost Age.
Phantox responds:
Thanks for your helpful review.</sarcasm>
Still Terrible
Like all of your submissions, this Flash lacks one big thing: talent.
The graphics are still poor, but the animation, though smoother, is almost worse. You drew each body part separately to create a full-body effect, but each body part is drawn so badly it would have scarcely been worse to have made them stick figures anyway. The animation is only smooth some of the time; when a guy is falling, the limbs fall slowly but smoothly, which is still unrealistic. The gunshots don't have decent visualization, and although the gun graphics are fair, everything else is not. The fast motions like running are still horrible, and the backgrounds are still bad, although better than the original.
The sound effects are still decent, but you got them from sounddog, so the only good thing it shows about you is judgment. I'd also congratulate you for having few (if any) errors in the enemy info and all that. I was expecting tons.
Animation is very poor, graphics are barely better than stick figures, shrapnel and fire effects were literally non-existent. It was unrealistic, unoriginal, unintelligent, and all around a bad Flash.
compare
compared to the other ones this is a big differnce! not bad at the animation ethier! overall you deserve a 9
Phantox responds:
Cool! I think the first few backgrounds sucked. They'll be better for my next one tho
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Well, I expected much more for such a high score ( 3.87 ) . But I enjoyed it.
Graphics : 4/10
Sound : 7/10
Animation : 5/10
Nice
The other too are really good and this has been the best. I liked the Stick person feel of the other ones though.
Also this could be a great game. Good Job.
Phantox responds:
Thanks. I'm not planning on making it a game tho