very solid it was!!!
Author Comments
This would be my first successful animation movie. I have been learning flash animation since I was 13, even I don't know the complete of it. Though, I got courage to make a short about a boy who buys a new T.V. but only get to enjoy it for only sometime. He is always beaten up by his fate. But he is cute...
If and only if it's a hit, I am goning to make the sequel of it and eventually a complete series. I have ideas about the topics and plots of the other versions but I will only begin to animate after seeing the result of it. If it's a hit, my only job would be producing KuKu.
Solid job
Aww, what the hell.
It's so ridiculous that it works. What I'd like is for you to get a better microphone, or maybe a better recording studio or sound software--something to remove the little buzzing background noise that comes in whenever you use a sound effect. It distracts.
Hmm
You apologise too much, the animation is a little slow, and you are too fearful of your recordings.
The sounds are poor quality, but that is a problem with your equipment, not your ability. However, the tone of your voice and the lack of tembre makes me picture you sitting in your room, door shut tight, quietly but akwardly mumbling into a microphone, trying not to be heard by anyone in your house.
To battle the natural buzz of your set-up, you need to be fearless in your voice recording. Say every word with heroic confidence, believe every line, and imagine each word coming from your lips is supposed to inspire a band of peasants, with lukemia, to take on the Knghts of the Round Table.
With a hefty scoop of valor in your speech, the recordings will sound far more professional. Also, your drawing is a touch bland. With effort, even the worst artist can draw a masterpiece, so throw in an extra 10 minutes on each flash session, just to add some details and maybe a gentle anecdote in the background. Like a pigeon flying at break-neck speed into a tree and puffing into a plume of feathers, or something of the sort.
SandySandeep responds:
thnx, man. Even i rubbed out the thinking of making a sequel but ur suggesstion hope to proove good.
Fun
But the sound was somewhat unpleasant, try working on that.
And buy the poor guy a lightning rod.