Confusing
Well, this flash is pretty random. There are a bunch of guys who want to kill Bob, and he blows the crap out of them. Please watch the whole thing before you rate, some parts are better than others. And watch through the credits, there is something after. If you think there are problems with it, please review and tell me how I can make it better, I will try to listen to all your comments. I know its short, but maybe I will build on it later. I am going to work on the stick figure animation when I get a chance, cuz I know it sucks.
Confusing
Yo B!
Hey! I see you used my song! I'm glad you liked my song enough to use it. It works well in the video.
As for the video itself, I know you've already heard everything I could say so I won't run my mouth, but suffice to say: not bad. Good for a first.
Oh, yeah, in the future, let me know if you're going to use my music. It's no big deal or anything, I just would've liked to have seen the video when it came out.
Anyway, nice work and I look forward to seeing future submissions. Maybe I can write you some music sometime. Hit me up.
not bad, I like it.
It may have been with no plot, and it may have been of poor quality. but what i rate is if it entertains me. this flash gave me good reason to pay attention to it. Good work. 9/10 5/5
P.S. Despite all the errors, you did a great job. keep it up.
It's okay...
I do see why people are giving this flash a zero, but whatever. In some respect, it was good. It got boring fast but for a first flash, it's pretty nice. I especially liked the music, and even though you did take the guns from ammu-nation.de.tf, (which are some seriously 1337 drawings) the graphics were sub-par.
Good job for a first. It's better than my shitty portal flash, that's for sure.
Thanks. I know it really isn't that great, it's just a random little thing I decided to make.
meh
its, really, not very good. if it was your fist flash then i would say "really good!" and give you 8/10 but as this isnt, then, because of things like graphics, annoying audio, bad storyline that a 4 yearold could have thought up (harsh i know, but it has to be said) and, well, i think it is just not very good atall
Well, it actually is my first real flash, and the first I've submitted to ng, but you shouldn't give extra just for that. There isn't a storyline because it's just a random flash. I know it isn't very good, I'm posting it here to get ideas on how to make it better.