She's really cute. Oh, and the flash is cool...
I really think the music didn't fit the flash very well considering it's pretty dark nature, perhaps a slower piece would've done the flash more justice? All considered though, your art style is very palatable and the story was unmistakable and pretty touching in it's own way, especially referencing back to the beginning.
It's really neat stuff, looking forward to moar (despite lack of recent activity... oh well...)