That was creepy.
Yes, it was. And what's up with capitalizing almost every word? It's not a title, and they're not names? Or maybe I'm just a grammar freak. -__-
But, uhm, yeah. That was pretty good. Kinda maybe.
Some parts you could've speeded up a tiny bit, and others slowed down, but it's better than I could've done. xD
...Probably...