well i cant really say much to it
i like the concept though it has been used many times before. it shows some inprovement from your last flashes just need to work on a few things but i guess i cant really talk because you are way better than me at flash making i cant even make 1 :( still keep working on it and you will be a great flash artist here and also remember to ask the help of others if you need to learn about something (not me)