This was a good start to this little Lock series of yours,the script was great as was the story i also loved the animation and i was happy to see it have a great amount of characters too,overall this was a solid start and i will go check out episode 2 now. =)
I quite like the way you've put this together - quick set 'em up, knock 'em down plays with the gags, though you could put a few more gags in each episode. Perhaps have something like a camping trip and someone forgets to bring the food, or something essential like that.
I think that you've got a good format, with very nice drawing and animation style and I can certainly see that you've settled into the Lock Legion nicely. I look forward to seeing more of these in the near future.
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Now if this isn't a good submission, then I don't know what is. The graphics were solid and wonderful to look at, first of all. And the story done in those scenes were also very funny in some points. The subtitles being different colors depending on who's speaking was also a worthy attachment. All in all, a good, enjoyable submission.
I can't wait for the next episode!
Thanks! Might be a while though. I have some projects that I have found more important.
I thought i would share a stupid moment..
I signed up with the LL and don't even have Flash.....
Animation: 9.9 (I give no tens in the sub categories)
Sound: 8.9 (I just don't like the distorted speech of LL, CC, and GG movies)
Overall: look to the upper right
cool kids end things with .9's
It makes it look more professional or something.