i dont like beging mean but...
there was no story plot no music it looked like crud and there was no humor at all but keep trying this time do somthing orginal make a new charcter or somthing. add some music and a reason why hes on there and how it eats him then your good.
ThIs MoViE WaS CRAP!!!!!!!!!!!!
At least there was some music at the loader.
Death by laptop
first of all, no music during the loader. Second of all, nice job.
We'll just leave it at that